Good thesis! It is short and to the point, doesn't show any opinions and is just factual. Will be very easy for you to transition into the rest of your paper!
good statement. Maybe instead of the word views you could use beliefs or opinons? Im not sure. Its great the way it is, yupp. I think what you have is perfect, i just felt i should ramble on a bit! :) hahah
Nice thesis. I like how its straight and to the point and clearly spits out what your paper is about. Personally, I think that's an awesome thesis that could potentially not need any fixing!
Good, straightforward thesis. It relays exactly what you're going to write your paper about, and it's very concise and to-the-point. It also doesn't include any bias, which is good because this is a resarch paper.
Good thesis! It is short and to the point, doesn't show any opinions and is just factual. Will be very easy for you to transition into the rest of your paper!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Paige, this thesis will allow you to present facts regarding both arguments, good l uck with the rest of your paper :)
ReplyDeletegood statement. Maybe instead of the word views you could use beliefs or opinons? Im not sure. Its great the way it is, yupp. I think what you have is perfect, i just felt i should ramble on a bit! :) hahah
ReplyDeleteNice thesis. I like how its straight and to the point and clearly spits out what your paper is about. Personally, I think that's an awesome thesis that could potentially not need any fixing!
ReplyDeleteGood, straightforward thesis. It relays exactly what you're going to write your paper about, and it's very concise and to-the-point. It also doesn't include any bias, which is good because this is a resarch paper.
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